The most annoying thing about this is the use of characters names. I noticed this within the first few chapters and it slowly started to drive me crazy. Even though the type was fairly large, I counted 12 mentions of O’Hara’s name on one page! Made me want to run the whole thing through Word and do a “find/replace” for the name O’Hara and replace it with “him/he”. Other than that annoying feature, the story was definately intrigueing.