All Consuming : Josh

Consumed "Stripped"

nobody@allconsuming.net (Josh) — Fri, 10 Oct 2008 21:46:56 GMT

Stripped

by Christina Aguilera

Consumed "The Rising"

nobody@allconsuming.net (Josh) — Fri, 10 Oct 2008 18:22:26 GMT

The Rising

by Bruce Springsteen

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Consumed "Under Construction"

nobody@allconsuming.net (Josh) — Thu, 09 Oct 2008 23:33:27 GMT

Under Construction

by Missy Elliott

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Consumed "At 89"

nobody@allconsuming.net (Josh) — Thu, 09 Oct 2008 22:38:38 GMT

At 89

by Pete Seeger

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Consumed "White Van Music"

nobody@allconsuming.net (Josh) — Thu, 09 Oct 2008 20:07:41 GMT

White Van Music

by Jake One

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Consumed "Futuristically Speaking: Never Be Afraid"

nobody@allconsuming.net (Josh) — Thu, 09 Oct 2008 18:50:57 GMT

Futuristically Speaking: Never Be Afraid

by Yo Majesty

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Consumed "Gangs of New York (2002)"

nobody@allconsuming.net (Josh) — Thu, 09 Oct 2008 07:17:52 GMT

Gangs of New York (2002)

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Consumed "Tail Swallower & Dove"

nobody@allconsuming.net (Josh) — Thu, 09 Oct 2008 00:31:43 GMT

Tail Swallower & Dove

by These Arms Are Snakes

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Consumed "Oak City"

nobody@allconsuming.net (Josh) — Thu, 09 Oct 2008 00:17:35 GMT

Oak City

by Teith

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Consumed "Moonwink"

nobody@allconsuming.net (Josh) — Wed, 08 Oct 2008 23:35:23 GMT

Moonwink

by Spinto Band

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Consumed "The Coral"

nobody@allconsuming.net (Josh) — Wed, 08 Oct 2008 21:32:01 GMT

The Coral

by The Coral

Consumed "Sunshine Hit Me"

nobody@allconsuming.net (Josh) — Wed, 08 Oct 2008 20:13:32 GMT

Sunshine Hit Me

by Band of Bees

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Consumed "Doomsdayer's Holiday"

nobody@allconsuming.net (Josh) — Wed, 08 Oct 2008 19:27:01 GMT

Doomsdayer's Holiday

by Grails

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Consumed "Another World"

nobody@allconsuming.net (Josh) — Wed, 08 Oct 2008 00:29:12 GMT

Another World

by Antony and the Johnsons

Consumed "Not Animal"

nobody@allconsuming.net (Josh) — Wed, 08 Oct 2008 00:04:37 GMT

Not Animal

by Margot & the Nuclear So and So's

Consumed "Such Fun"

nobody@allconsuming.net (Josh) — Tue, 07 Oct 2008 21:11:40 GMT

Such Fun

by Annuals

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Consumed "Dig Out Your Soul"

nobody@allconsuming.net (Josh) — Tue, 07 Oct 2008 19:57:24 GMT

Dig Out Your Soul

by Oasis

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Consumed "Power in Numbers"

nobody@allconsuming.net (Josh) — Tue, 07 Oct 2008 19:04:07 GMT

Power in Numbers

by Jurassic 5

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Consumed "Twilight of the Thunder God"

nobody@allconsuming.net (Josh) — Thu, 02 Oct 2008 18:31:06 GMT

Twilight of the Thunder God

by Amon Amarth

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Consumed "Paper Trail"

nobody@allconsuming.net (Josh) — Thu, 02 Oct 2008 00:28:56 GMT

Paper Trail

by T.I.

WORTH IT!

A decent rough draft with a lot of potential (rated 4 stars)

nobody@allconsuming.net (Josh) — Sat, 17 May 2008 22:50:48 GMT

All the Clever Words On Pages

by Paul Harrison

From a literary perspective, it was sophomoric; definitely a first draft with a lot of fluff, and it didn’t take long before Paul seemed like a whiny LiveJournal guy that everyone skips over because he has to say something about everything going on in his life, and rarely eloquently. At the same time, though, I could tell he’s an intelligent guy who needs to work on his writing skills and seeing his writing from a reader’s perspective.

The parts with Aaron were where it really shined, though, and not due to bias because I respect Aaron so much but more because it was a great example as to why I do: many wise words and an outpouring of humility, love and beauty in his actions.

The book could have been half as long and said just as much. It’s a good rough version with potential to be amazing if a strong editor took it to the chopping block.